Is there any group on linked who can give their opinion about pitch video and project prior to go for crowd funding.
Your Video is your business model, business plan and your 2 minutes opportunity front of millions of people. In 1st 15 second you got to raise enough interest since mostly be gone by then .
The biggest element you have to have in mind is people . They do not NEED anything that CrowdFunding can produce . They get the goods only because they WANT them . Then do not give them much of the features ( Frontal lobe - Logic ), you need to work on ( Limbic lobe - emotion ).

For example sense of Freedom or power they get from your goods or service .
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Video optimization and SEO is a must since you crowdfuding does not start at its campaign starting date . You need to promote it before ( crowd building and branding ) , during ( CrowdFunding ) and after ( Go to market ) the campaign.
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